Here is my original stream of thought in it’s entirety:
‘Your worldview befits the closed-ended-ness of a cocoon safe and self-satisfied but befret of the keys to the great mysteries. Oh it pains me to see you languish here mate! How jubilant for me (and you) to light a single silk thread of that which encloses you so as to set you free so that we, staying the course, could run together forever.”
So, in the final act, I created two, 5-7-5-7-7 Tankas, releasing the sequel “Silk Cocoons” first and then the prequel “This Binding Cocoon” second. Such is poetic license when one goes about ‘wordsmithing’!
The “Cocoon” Tankas
ReplyDeleteHere is my original stream of thought in it’s entirety:
‘Your worldview befits the closed-ended-ness of a cocoon safe and self-satisfied but befret of the keys to the great mysteries. Oh it pains me to see you languish here mate! How jubilant for me (and you) to light a single silk thread of that which encloses you so as to set you free so that we, staying the course, could run together forever.”
So, in the final act, I created two, 5-7-5-7-7 Tankas, releasing the sequel “Silk Cocoons” first and then the prequel “This Binding Cocoon” second. Such is poetic license when one goes about ‘wordsmithing’!